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posted by Sam Bett at 11:34 AM
"and at once she realized"? Changes the time in the sentence, brings it more in immediate present, but the "once she realized" seems disconnected from "he didn't want."
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"and at once she realized"? Changes the time in the sentence, brings it more in immediate present, but the "once she realized" seems disconnected from "he didn't want."
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